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This week I’m posting a little further into my historical romance wip Midnight Blaze. Enjoy!
“Emerson, get up and be quick about getting decent, we leave at once.” James
shouted while pulling back the drapes. Sunshine poured into the expansive
chamber, stirring the Viscount and his guest beneath the tangle of sheets.
“Really, James! Was the intrusion necessary?” The Viscount groaned, slung
his legs out of bed and rang for his valet.
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Great action, I was swinging out of the bed with him. Sensational six!
And to be taken away from a warm body? But I’m sure their departure is necessary.
Wonderful six! Looking forward to reading more.
The viscount has such great voice. You communicate so much about his character in this piece. Enjoyed this.
I’d be much more growly with the sun coming in and warm body next to me.
I love the natural flow of the conversation while keeping it in the period. Good job.
Ooh, enjoyed!
Your characters are so three dimensional I feel like I know them. Great scene vividly drawn in this snippet. Well done!
Nothing like a rude awakening. Damn James
Poor viscount!
Lol – I felt like I was right there in the scene! Great job!
Poor guest!
Ugh. I hate being woken early in the morning. I feel for him. lol
I wonder what the rush is.
I love how he just bursts in on his friend! LOL
Love the picture you painted with your descriptive words. Good job.
Oh I bet he’s hating James right about now. Great 6, thanks for sharing!
James seems just too cheery about getting him out of bed like that. Love this scene. Wonder what the ‘guest’ does now?
Poor guy, being roused from bed with a visitor…Nice job!
Nicely descriptive–good job!
I’d be a little peeved, too, lol. Thanks for sharing!
I like their voices and the fast paced action. Fun characters. The Viscount will no doubt be a bit grumpy for a while though. Lol
Yeah! Leave the poor guy alone, he’s got someone in his bed!
Great six.
Great six. Hate being woken up like that!