Thanks for your continued support in visiting here on Sundays. I offer my apologies in advance if I haven’t left any comments in the last couple of weeks. I hope to visit and comment everyone this week, time permitting. Be sure to visit the Six Sentence Sunday website here to catch all the great posts this week.
This week I’ll be posting again from the first draft of my contemporary wip Crushed Velvet. Enjoy!
I’m going to kill, Adrianna!
Lydia, groaned and leaned against the fridge. She pressed her temples and whispered. “Is there anything, she hasn’t mentioned about our high school years?”
“Mentioned what?”
Lydia, traipsed into the kitchen, stopping next to her boyfriend.
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Compelling writing and this story has me hooked!
Oh, I want more to this story! I want to know what else they did. LOL Great six!
Sounds like they had quite a time in high school!
lol uh oh. Wonder what else will be revealed? Nice job!
interesting, pulled right in, yes I am, more please!!
A lot of intrigue in this six. Good job.
Lots of tension bubbling in this one
Intriguing – wonder what they got up to at high school?
Sounds like they may have got up to some interesting things during their high school years.
Ooh, secrets are about to be revealed! I think there there are a few extra commas here, but great snippet!!
I’m intrigued! Now I need to know what secrets might be revealed! Great six
Oh, intriguing.
Busted! Now she’s going to have to explain everything…
Oh! Now that’s intriguing!
lol. What happened in high school?