Comments for Layna Pimentel http://laynapimentel.com Romance where you least expect it. Mon, 20 Feb 2012 10:13:55 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ Comment on Six Sentence Sunday – February 19, 2012 by Gayle Ramage http://laynapimentel.com/2012/02/19/six-sentence-sunday-february-19-2012/#comment-2384 Mon, 20 Feb 2012 10:13:55 +0000 http://laynapimentel.com/?p=1791#comment-2384 Yikes! I hope he doesn’t discover her!

]]> Comment on Six Sentence Sunday – February 19, 2012 by diannehartsock http://laynapimentel.com/2012/02/19/six-sentence-sunday-february-19-2012/#comment-2383 Mon, 20 Feb 2012 01:17:50 +0000 http://laynapimentel.com/?p=1791#comment-2383 I think you’re about to be discovered, Charlotte! :)

]]> Comment on Six Sentence Sunday – February 19, 2012 by Nick Kelly http://laynapimentel.com/2012/02/19/six-sentence-sunday-february-19-2012/#comment-2382 Mon, 20 Feb 2012 01:06:26 +0000 http://laynapimentel.com/?p=1791#comment-2382 Tense! Great SSS.

]]> Comment on Six Sentence Sunday – February 19, 2012 by Skye Warren http://laynapimentel.com/2012/02/19/six-sentence-sunday-february-19-2012/#comment-2381 Sun, 19 Feb 2012 17:40:41 +0000 http://laynapimentel.com/?p=1791#comment-2381 Love the atmosphere – very dark and tense without a lot of adjectives to build it.

]]> Comment on Six Sentence Sunday – February 19, 2012 by DeAnna Felthauser http://laynapimentel.com/2012/02/19/six-sentence-sunday-february-19-2012/#comment-2380 Sun, 19 Feb 2012 16:40:17 +0000 http://laynapimentel.com/?p=1791#comment-2380 Uh oh! I wonder what happens. Will she be discovered? I wanna know!

]]> Comment on Six Sentence Sunday – February 19, 2012 by S. J. Maylee http://laynapimentel.com/2012/02/19/six-sentence-sunday-february-19-2012/#comment-2379 Sun, 19 Feb 2012 16:38:13 +0000 http://laynapimentel.com/?p=1791#comment-2379 oh boy, is she going to get away?!?!
great 6!!

]]> Comment on Six Sentence Sunday – February 19, 2012 by dakotatrace http://laynapimentel.com/2012/02/19/six-sentence-sunday-february-19-2012/#comment-2378 Sun, 19 Feb 2012 15:27:48 +0000 http://laynapimentel.com/?p=1791#comment-2378 Love the suspense. Will he find her or won’t he…great six!

]]> Comment on Six Sentence Sunday – February 19, 2012 by D'Ann Linscott-Dunham http://laynapimentel.com/2012/02/19/six-sentence-sunday-february-19-2012/#comment-2377 Sun, 19 Feb 2012 15:21:33 +0000 http://laynapimentel.com/?p=1791#comment-2377 Oh, nice! I like very much!

]]> Comment on Six Sentence Sunday – February 19, 2012 by Alix Cameron http://laynapimentel.com/2012/02/19/six-sentence-sunday-february-19-2012/#comment-2376 Sun, 19 Feb 2012 14:21:07 +0000 http://laynapimentel.com/?p=1791#comment-2376 Loving the work in your dialogue. Great job!

]]> Comment on Six Sentence Sunday – February 19, 2012 by Liz Crowe http://laynapimentel.com/2012/02/19/six-sentence-sunday-february-19-2012/#comment-2375 Sun, 19 Feb 2012 14:16:56 +0000 http://laynapimentel.com/?p=1791#comment-2375 well, well, well…yeah? I know I want to know more. well done!

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